Crit Feedback
During crit I was told that i do not have to draw out each page of my story as my story has to many variables. Also I was told to stop drawing them by hand and do some digitally instead.
It was suggested that I get a thorough flow chart done so I know exactly where my story is going at which point, it will also give others looking at my work some knowledge into what part of the story they are looking at and where I am trying to take the story.
Some other comments where that they liked the style of drawing and the overall layout of the story.
Changes After
After crit I have gone an scanned in all my storyboards and wireframes. And i have made some of them digitally using Illustrator and Photoshop.
I had already produced flow charts but did not have them at hand to show at crit.
